WoW is all I can say, this poem is well written and in all reality so true to many out there. Keep up the good work, you have true talent.
cass

Awww! how sad but really well written! 5/5

Omg! That is very very very sad. it brought tears to my eyes, I am completely speechless, this was amazing and filled with tons of emotions, you have a great talent! 5/5

How sad ='(

"her mommy made her feel worthless
and her daddy's beatings were oh so long"

ARGHH I HATE PHYSICAL ABUSE TO CHILDERN!!!!

gasp* =o

that is a really magical poem....touched me soo so so deep...

really amazing expressionative work...truely magic

xx

AWW omg i started to cry!!!!!!
Very Good!