I liked that

Excellent. I am ready to go to part two.

This is so good
I love your style, and I read the other ones too. You have such talent and passion, never stop writing!
Love
Tina
< 33

GOOD poem very good

Ooh i decided to read ur poem .. its real good i like *smiles*

Oh my gosh, this is SUCH a beautiful poem! The images you create are so real, so peaceful and private. Can't wait to read part 2. Thank you for commenting on my poem! Keep up the awesome work!
~dandy~

Wow;; Thank You For Your Praise Of My Quote... You An Amazing Writer

Great dream/ poem. Ive already read all the poems but didnt leave a comment so i guess ill leave comments.

-henry

I know this emotions from the poem u have experienced them for real.u wrote beautifully what u feel down the paper