Please let me know if you also feel
like living a life of a helpless slave
please don't tell me if you ever feel
like painting thorns on my beautiful grave

loved those lines :)
the work u put into it is amazing..a wonderful ending too.... 5/5

Hey darl a touching piece very well structured! great job! keep it upxx

Beautiful poem i absolutly love it!!!

An ultimate love poem! I can see that no one compares with you. Well I absolutely loved the poem, word by word, line by line. You wrote this very strongly, and your feelings are very clear here. What should we call it, falling in love with the wrong person, or just simply being unlucky in love?

Anyways, the whole poem is just breathtaking, but your opening and concluding stanzas are just outstanding. Keep these beautiful 'love' poems coming.

Best wishes Always
Michelle

Ooops, back to love poem??? I'm so impressed!!!!
great piece of work honey, beautifully written, I loved how it worded, and the rhyme scheme was very sweet and new to read =)

Your poems are so enjoyable and wonderful..perfect way on writing them. you're one of the most talented writers I ever seen =)

Keep it up and Good luck with the comings
Take care of yourself
Luv
NemO XxXxXxX

Speechless. I can say this one of the most beautiful poem i have read .mixtures of wondering and love.EXcellent job.

Ok.. i'm letting u know.... that i totally feel this poem...it's awesome..............
i felt every word.. every single word just touched my soul...
it was great..............
5.5

much love,
ipsita

Nice work. the title is very thought provoking and is so true when one is forced into a situation like that.

great reading your work
good luck
shobhana

Awww wow good job with this 5/5

That's a good poem.

Beautiful poem! Very well wrtten and depicted. Keep writing!!

Heather Marie*

Always enjoy reading your poems. It's just another fantastic poem from you! Very touching and deep... Great
work!

Hi dear.
i must say its lovely..........wonderful..aur kya kahu yaar:0)
u just imagine ok. plz.

luv

Beautiful! loved it!
keep up the great work~

Sweet, It rhymed. I thought this was a vivid poem of how love is, It melts away after a while, even though you still feel. Keep writing!!

SacrificedButterfly

Beautiful, very well written. adding you to my favorites. I like your work

Very good poem

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

You amaze me with your writing! I stand in awe. Excellent! Your friend Cindy

Nitin
It had been awhile since I read this piece. It is so deep and sad. Yet it is beautiful. The imagery is awesome.

Please don't tell me if you ever feel
like being in love with me once again
like pulling me from this everlasting pain
hiding me in your arms as if world is insane

This stanza really hit me. Excellent writing.
Love Cindy