It's so...depressing lol. But depressing poems...my favourite. They seem to just hold my attention. Don't ask me why lol. But great poem. Flow was good, vocab was amazing. I don't know what else to say lol. 5/5 xoxo =)

Samantha

This is soo good very well wriiten i loved the way you wrote

" Ive painted a picture" and how you changed it to traced and so on!!! good job

I liked it alot.

Hey beautiful poem! amazing, i really like the way you repeated that one line the whole way through, you kept my attention all the way through. Thank you so much for your comment, it does mean alot to me.
love Soph

This really is amazing...the picture shows perfectly in my mind as I run through your verses...really really sad...but really really true...
Good flow even though without rhymes,you've got a great stle!