I loved that poem i think i was beautiful
keep it up : )

That was really good.
I love that you wrote about a rose and that its not always a beautiful thing
nice work.

I'm curious as to why you stopped rhyming for the 9th to 12th lines. Also bear in mind that proper punctuation really is a HUGE help in emphasizing what you're trying to say in poetry.

I know it's not seen as that important to the younger generation (we've all been it) but when it comes to good poetic emphasis I would say it's essential.