Comments : Chaos theory

  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I like this. I love photography, and stormclouds and dead trees are a particular favourite topic of mine, so I found it very easy to visualize your words. Having siad that, your line "It slowly fades away leaving only a memory which too will someday die and fade away." might work better as this:

    "It slowly crumbles away, leaving only a memory which too will someday fade away."

    I don't think you need to place too much emphasis on the tree's death as it's specified so forcefully in the previous life.

  • 17 years ago

    by kia

    That was great. Best imagery i've heard. Really helped to show what you were talking about. I understood ur theory too. Thats rather a shoker by itself. :P. Take care