This is awesome
your so good
damn
wouldnt that be kewl?

well
your so lucky to have a talent like this
ur the best ive seen

-katie

Wow your talented, I like the poem.

Wow i like this one a lot!
Geez i can really relate to it =[
but anyway you have a lot of talent, ive read several of your poems, and they're really good. Its also nice to have someone here is also my own age lol. 5/5 =]

anywayss... yeah.
XO-- sarah

I really liked this
& i can relate
I like the way it was written it flowed well..kinda catchy!
Anyways great job!

It was.....welll......it did have this weird way that made it interesting. Really enjoyed it but kinda didn't like some of the words which messed a little with the flow. But the last stanza was cool.
~Faith-less