This was a sad poem that almost brought a tear to me eye. This read evoked a deep sadness as it reminded me of those who fought for our freedom and cannot be with us now to celebrate the victory.
But it also made me think of a person's battle with depression and how it affects every aspect of life.
for the line:
Memories I can't regain
it may red easier:
memories never regained

It was a fantastic write as the flow was uniterrupted amd the rhyming did not seemed forced. 5/5

Thats a trip.. GOOD WORK

Wow, deep stuff, i liked it

Arhhh this was a bit of a sad read but really good read the flow was fantastic errrrrrrrr i dont really no what else to sad bout this because there are no bad pionts.

good work i give you a 5/5 keep them coming.

gem in cheshire

This is excellent
*Keep up with the good work*
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