Great job, the expression is amazing and the truth behind it gives it meaning. you have great word choice and i flowed very well except for the line"Sleeping soundly far away in a lost world" it just seems out of place, but great job! Keep it up 5/5

That was great! really really great. its so true... 5/5 ...keep writing.

*beth*
-xox-

Ok let me say firstly...i loveddddddd it, it was great and very powerful, full of tonsss of emotions..

ok second i am soooooo confused haha i understood half of it and the other parts i didnt! but wether i understood it or not doesnt make it less great!!!! i definitely give it a 5/5

Wow. that was a great write, the flow wasn't bad either. 5/5 by the way thanks for the comments

Itz really sad... i mean, i donno how one should consider cutting himself/herself when things didn't go the way they want it 2... its really depressin!!!

Omg! i read this and almost started crying becuase its soo true.

i liked the metaphor. it really made me think.

ur explination at the end was sooo perfect.

im soo glad that there is someone like you who can actually put those kind of feelings into words.

It was a good poem, but i rated it 4/5 because it was so long

Very emotional, and powerful.
5/5

Wow. This was really good also. And I liked the message you were sending across. I used to cut. And it didn't ruin me. Like, It's just taken away a part of me. I dunno. Anyways, back to the poem. I thought it was written really well. Nothing I would change either. I'm really starting to love your poems. Everytime I read them, They're getting better and better. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Omg, i can totally relate. i only ever cut myself once. one stroke, acros my left arm and every time i see the scar i'm ashamed and feel guilt.

it was a very strong poem. very powerful. i loved it

That really was great... and everything you said at the end is all true... not that i would know, but it sounds true... wonderful job 5/5