Comments : My heart is yours

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, a great poem but sad one. It is all part of life and just like a quote saying "Life happens so deal with it" cause really we can not do anything about where life take us. great poem and i hope everything will be fine with u.

  • 17 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    Really really good poem! lots of emotion!

  • 17 years ago

    by Krisanta

    Aww hun im so sorry to hear about this i liked the poem tho it was sad but you are strong and i know you will make it out of this and many more painful days to come, just remeber im here when you need me and dont forget that. i will be praying for you. keep your head up. _krisanta_

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Very heartfelt and beautiful work.

  • 17 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Excellent job, Great rhythm to the poem

  • 17 years ago

    by xLongxXxLostx

    I absolutely love this. I really relate to it a lot, and I think you wrote it beautifully. If it is true, Im so sorry that you have to go through it, but know that you aren't the only one whose felt this way.. I hope things get better for you. Just remember to hang in there.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, hun. That was really sad. I hope you're alright.

    You expressed your emotions really well in this. I loved it. I could also relate in somewhat way too. Keep it up and smile. =) 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by not a poet

    Good writting but the message is a little odd...no one should help you with drugs, he should have helped you off of the drugs....but that is a false presumption! i loved the writting! very to-the-point!
    keep it up!

  • This was an intense poem. i really liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Very touching poem---It is unbelievably deep, strong, and emotional. When I finished reading I was just like ''Wow''. It is sooo...I cant even find a word to describe it...I LOVE IT! Great work-Stay Strong no matter what 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow!! it was very deep but very good sad and very talented you have a wonderful way of wirting what you feel i have this sort of emotion to your poems they make me smile and i don't know why xoxroxyxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow very powerful and full of emotions... another good write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was awesome, so poerful, sad and ful of emotion. keep writing, you have talent
    xxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This is so sad.. I'm sorry this had to happen to you if it did. I know what true love feels like having someone always by your side... Take care of yourself.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very interesting and well written. i liked it coz it was different and you don't read a lot of these around : D well done.