Awww i loved it, and i gave you a 5 hehe!

Good poem. i like the pace

Awww...man this was a very sad poem but very Awsome!...i liked it alot! 5.5

I love it! i agree with poisonmist, great pace!

keep it up!

Hey i really liked your poem. good job. its deep...

This poem is amazing, you write about such sadness and pain but you use your words to make it beautiful! 5/5

Wow. that was really good. you have a gift... hopefully you don't kill urself before you become famouse of anything! j.k. lol (hahahahaha...ha) great poem.

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Wow again very deep with emotion i loved it keep it up
_forever carly_