Oooo! very nice! Makes me want to go to a beach...lol...love it!

Very nice. I've never heard of this type of poem. Looks pretty cool, I might give it a go one day.

I thought you did an amazing job on it! Great wording, Everything. Loved it! 5/5 Keep it up!

`Taleee. xx.

You say a lot in eight lines here. It's quite incredible. Great job.