Chels enjoyable read.

In stanza 2 you have " at the beginning but no the end...simple typo.

This was filled with so much love i could almost see it dripping from the words. You are a lucky girl to have family like this. Not everyone has a family they can turn to. I have a very small family but luckily we all support one another.
I am impressed with the rhymes used in this poem as I know you have said it to me b4, but i must say it now...the rhymes used were original and not the repeated one syllable words you see in MOST poems (not jus on this site).
I thought this was a very well written poem with excellent flow. Goog Write!

A great poem about love and friendship and family. You are very lucky to have your cousin to turn to Chelsey-Lynn!
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"