I like this.. It's different and has an interesting flow to it..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Another good poem, No is a very strong word, which you showed here, well done
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A bit patchy, the flow is not so good, its a tad too broken up, i think it would eb better if some of the lines were put together so they're longer. also the spacing thing again...

-biscuit-