This is a really great poem!!! a lot of people can relate to this!

Very very good! strong powerful imagery! excellent work! i really look forward to reading more of yours!

My, my, my...this leaves me in such a state of awe. It's brilliantly written. I adore this part:

"Your an unwritten story
That leaves the ending untold.
You discard me like a piece of paper.
Crumpled & forgotten, I fold."

Just wow...Absolutely flawless from beginning to end. Take care and keep it up~Holly

Your simply one of the best writers I've ever read of.. 5 / 5