Eyys dis is really gud i dont think it didnt seem right it flowed pretty good

good work 5/5

[xxx] leah [xxx]

Beautiful and to the point, i can't think of any flaws. very nice.

I love the emotion - 5/5. =D

-*La Little Lor Lor*

P.S. Thanks for the comment. =)

I enjoyed this poem the best out of yours so far...i can relate to it...thanks for the comment...

Wow that was good i luved ya choice of words!! it flowed fine
wow once again luved it mwah take care
x x xmoniquex x x