I like this its very short and to the point i can connect with grat job

I think it is very safe to say it than wondering to say or not... :o))

very nicely written
all the best and take care
5/5

Great poem! i no exactly what you are feeling, you sum it all up nicely! thanx for comment! take care, defo 5/5 keep up brill work! x x

I thought it was very good
but i feel like it should longer
like you have more to say
and you should
its Love
words are limitless haha
thank you for your comment
take care

Excellent poem! i loved every bit of it specially the ending! and thx for the beautiful comment on my poem
Much love
Take care
xx

You have targeted a question that I am sure every girl asks herself at some point. Very well written. Keep it up.

It's so cool

I TH0UGHT THiS P0EM WAS 0K.
iT SH0ULD HAS BEEN A LiL` M0RE EXPANDED.
&& THE RHYMiNG MAKE THE P0EM A LiL` TACKY.
Y0U HAVE SUM GREAT iDEAS, BUT i THiNK
iT`S NEED T0 BE EXPANDED. BUT S0O FAR WHAT U HAVE iS GREAT. N0O DiSRESPECT !

FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX. :)