Comments : Unsuspecting Love

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    WOW PERFECTLY WRITTEN, you express yourself in such a good way a full of emotion, i want to give advice to some of the club members but , you are all greater than me lol great this one touch me!!!!
    and like doug always says to mke dont stop writting you have a great talent keep it up...

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Amazing emotion and i could completely relate to your words, Excellent poem!!!

    My Fav line was
    To hear your voice was every reason ,
    worth awaking.

    Ooh is was just great this poem lol Keep on writing!!!!
    5*

  • 17 years ago

    by *_Clara_*

    Lovaly poem i loved it keeo it up
    : )