Lovely poem, dearie. Excellent write 5/5
Ace!!Mate.
-Saphy-

Wow this is really good. I know who it feels to lose a love.

Ummm it was good changed moods a lot

This poem is very emotional and nicely written. I like the rhymes that you used.
Keep writing!
I would just suggest you to correct some spelling in the poem, proper spelling wold leave better impression. I don't want to offend you, it's just my opinion.
Anyway, good job on this one!

Wow! im lovin it....imost def feel u on diz! went thro dat 2!!!!

Lost love is always a godo thing to write about, so many emotions to put into words. Good job. 5/5

That was a really really really good poem fer real

HUmm, I love the poem nice work, however I thinck that if you would use proper grammer and wording it would leave a great impretion

You need to remember to capitalize your I's keep up the work

I liked it-it seems like a very honest poem!! keep writing. xoxo

Changed emotion quite alot. lol but i liked it
it was good =]
i know how you feel
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good job keep writing =]

xo.louii