Really really good

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You write like this has all happened to you, like your in the mind of everything you write about. I think thats really incredible. Keep it up.
Gret poem=)

This is written beautifully.
at first, it didn't make sense to me, but i read it again and the power of it just HIT me . . .
wow . . .
this was awesome!!!
great work!
5/5!