Sweet!
this is a really nice poem!
written nicely, flowed smoothly, and i like the way you ended it especially!!!!
5/5!

Beautiful........just plain beautiful

This was another really good one. I'm new at writing and reading poetry (as well as this site) so I don't really know what to say, except that it's realistic and dark and I could totally relate. Anyways, I can't wait for more :)