I liked this alot..it really shows how much u love her...im sorry that u cant see her for while, but it'll be that much better when u do get to see her again. u are awesome and hav great poetry...this was beautiful.
love ya lot,
sore

It shows how much you really care about her, i liked it a lot. Also lol at that mars line, you really were lost for a word there weren't you :P