Thx i like yours to :)

Awesome work Kayla! thanx for the really sweet comment!
this poem deserves 5/5!

Wow, hit the core and pain of war. I hate war, i hate how it has become a neccesity, i hate knowing that someone who i used to talk to is in Lebanon, in amungst a war killing hundreds, and I may never see her again. War is drastic and you captured it, nicely flowed, perhaps the last line was a bit short, but still good. Keep it up!