Wow this is a nice poem!!!
it makes u realize how important friends are nd how quickly u can take advantage of them w/out knowing it...nice 5/5

Fantastic job yet again! It really does let you know how much a friend can change your life. =) I also liked the use of words. Useage of words brings passion to the poem, and really tells how the writer actually felt. It's not just some words thrown together to make a "poem". Good job. =) Keep up the writing.

xoxo sammycakes

Wow... This was a very emotional piece of literature. At first, I thought you were talking about a person (which I'm guessing was your plan.) I like how you kept it vague like that, only to reveal the secret in the last 3 stanzas. The flow was impecable and flawless. You have an amazing talent! Keep writing!! My favorite stanza was:

"Patiently you wait until I need you.
Hiding in darkness until I cry out to you.
Longing to see you , hold you, caress you.
Your touch is all I need to soothe me.
You know how to stop the torment.
Release the pressure inside.
No one brings me ecstasy like you.
You are my salvation."

~BJ~

Wow. I'm guessing this was about self harm? ..If it was, it's really different to most I've read. An excellent read indeed. Nothing at all I'd change. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow! I really do not know what to say I am completely speechless...When it first started out I had no idea It was going to turn out the way it did! That was just amazing, you did a beautiful job on it! it was perfection! 5/5

Very deep and moving. I really like your style, it is different. Some of your expressions and metaphors are just brillant in my opinion, and the way you fit your words together is beautiful. Great Job! Nice ending, too.

Wow, excellent twist, i love the metaphor, this is written so well.

-biscuit-

Awww! This Was Great!! Your A Brilliant Writer I Enjoyed Your Stuff :D 5/5
Love,
Steph

Simply amazing. This is really not what I expected, but I love it.

I love this poem. By far this is my favorite one. Seriously, the detail and everything was wonderful..At first I thought you were going to be talking about a person..then I relzied you weren't. It kept my attention and I enjoyed it.

Wow.i love it.i can relate to it.my favorite part was:
So tonight I sleep in blood soaked sheets.
mine are bloody too.
but trust me,it does get better.i mean for heveans sake my last poem was called "a day thats good"always here:D
--lexie

What I really liked about this poem was how you talked to it as though it were a person, a friend, and some of your descriptions. I think ou could have limited the you and yours though as a suggestion. LEave it to the reader's imagination.

Wow, I'm speechless. Is this really a friend?? I'm a little flabbergasted by this paragraphy tho:
Yet I know this can't go on.
I wake each morning feeling dirty and disgusted.
What brought me to this?
How could I feel this way about you?
What we have is wrong.
But you are my naughty little secret.
Every waking hour is filled with thoughts of you
How good you could make me feel
if I will once more let you caress my skin.

Why was it wrong??? It was a friend right?? I'm just a little confused here!
Other then that, awesome well written poem!

Wow a very different poem.. Is it about a friend? Because it sounds to me like it could be about an object you use to self-harm... (in the poem). Anyway well done it's a good poem. 5/5
- Polly

I can relate to this in every way. Even though this poem doesn't rhyme, I feel like it has a flow. I love how you've defined exactly how I feel. 5/5

~ Tina

Not bad... It's very cliche...I'm not sure what to say, I just didn't like it. I know you can do better.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5