Umm...i think its ok...but there have been a lot more added nd its short...but for how it is good

I think the way you wrote this made it really relate able- people always say use every detail you can but I like that you didn't cause then I can relate to this and many others can too- good job!

I think the way you wrote this made it really relate able- people always say use every detail you can but I like that you didn't cause then I can relate to this and many others can too- good job!

Thanks..