Ace write!

Reminds me of an old mate of mine. Sad tale though. Ran away to America he did! Not even a good-bye. Hell, not even a bloody "I'll miss you."

Good work, lass.
LOVE
xx Belle xx

Well ace, mate!! Loved it!! 5/5

-SapphireFNevois-

Aww im sorry to hear that but this was a good poem keep it up and stay strong ppl make mistakes and this poem shows you understand that. keep writing your good. _krisanta_

Very well done

time

Very sad yet very beautiful!

Dee that was an amazing poem...I think you have awsome talent and it shows more and more within your work. Great job and I hope to read more from you. I love you girl.
Love your friend
Jennifer

Very heartfelt =) cherry

This ia an amazing poem! It ends very nicely. A sad topic but you've written it so very well! keep writing!

Aww. I liked this one a lot. It had great emotion and heart. Nice work.

-Jennifer.

Oh wow Dee. Lovely friendship poem =]

Excellent.5/5

-Cassandra-NothingxGoldxCanxStay-

Very nice... very sad... its so true to life and i think thats why it can affect people much... keep up the good work and stay strong

Its been a little sence Ive read this one and I still love it. Hope to see more writing from you
Love
Jennifer

Aww..That is so sad.
Has she never come back?
Or called?..
Really great poem.

Thanks for the comment.

O.G.

Thats really good.. But it's so sad that, that happened!