How can this not have comments, i thought your language used was impeccable and the whole concept is one thats not overdone at all.
Well done, i liked it
5/5
*Gem*

I agree with the last two comments.
This was a great read.
The meaning was so deep and true.
Excellent Job.
5/5
Keep it up.
Elaine

I love the idea behind this.
Live for the moment;No matter what happened in the past.

Your vocab was excellent and your flow rocked as always.

I liked it :]

I liked this one too. You know, you're really changing my perspective on friendship poems. I usually steer away from them, but with each one of yours I read, I fall in love with them, haha. Yours aren't all mushy "oh she's my best friend!!" poems, they hold MEANING, they hold TRUTH, but in a sophisticated way. One thing though, in the line, "Who knew wed get so twisted" "wed" should be "we'd". Otherwise, it's like saying "I wed him" (married him..I'm sure you knew what I meant haha)

Anyways, another great write Dear. You're inching close to your goal of getting on my favorites. :P

5.5