Morgan --
I didn`t want you to lose your 5.0 rating on this poem ;; so I was a little generous. I think your grammar definitely needs some work. Thats the first thing I look for in poetry, and its a key essential. Darling, please make sure that you are capitalizing your 'I'`s. It looks bad and unprofessional if you don`t. But other than that, you actually did a pretty good job. Not bad at all! So I gave it a 5/5. Keep it up.

Much Love,
Samantha Hollywood

I liked this a lot. It is such a sweet picture in my mind. Tow people so in love. Great job 5/5 Loretta

Awww.. this was very sweet.. it could also be considered a eplicit poem though.. the descriptions were good and quite beautiful.. the flow was a little off but it was fine.. nice job! 5/5

Wow how passionate and sweet, wow, very nce 4/5

Wonderful poem. i loved it. keep up the good work.5/5