This is really good! i really like it. I know its hard to lose someone. Just keep holding on.
-Michelle

Hey you have great talent in writing. It is really hard losing someone you care about..Thank you for leaving a comment on my poem.

Loved It!
xx

Hey there,
wow this was realli gd! it had a great flow and i liked the repetition of the word "babe" 5/5 =D xxxxx

o and tank u 4 commenting one of mi poems

This is a wonderful piece. I also wish for something like this. It is very touching and heartfelt. He will always with you.