Awwww. I love it. =]
Great job on this.
I favor the first couple lines the most.
=] Keep up the good work. =D

>black&&blue

To the ends of hte Earth I vowed to follow.
[I think you meant 'the' instead of 'hte']

I thought this poem was beautiful also. Such warming feelings in this. Very heartfelt indeed. I loved the last stanza. That left me in awe. Wonderful job. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

AHH! You're gunna make me cry! Great write. You really have a passion for poem writing. You're great at it. =) xoxo

Samantha