Omg....... thats really good sad but awesome i liked it a bunch..

It's quite good. But could do with some more improvement =)

Just like you want
Just like I NOW want

Yeah it's nice. Gave a 5.

Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay

Awesome poem. sorry about ur situation. at times like these... u must talk to someone about it and keep writing! u rock!

Aww thats ssooooo sad :(

Thats a really good poem! i know how u fell i wonder the same thing to every day about my mom kinda??