Comments : First Time < 33

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow what a great poen

    I am sure of this
    Because you are the one
    This is being done out of love
    Not just for fun
    The reasons are so clear.

    especially that lines I like that very much simple but deep great one 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow I love this it is sweet and full of love 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by K

    Nice poem! You hid the good points of love making, the other good points besides the actual love making that is. You told the feelings which most poems lack when people right about making love. Keep up the good work miss, cant wait to read more!