I like this is rly good. i like that ur helping the "little guy" and making it as though they are the loser i like that 5/5

I like this is rly good. i like that ur helping the "little guy" and making it as though they are the loser i like that 5/5

Great poem! This is so true---I hate it when people make fun of others just because they're different or because of the way they look. Good write. I enjoyed reading it---5/5

Sad poem. Good though. It's pretty sad how things like this really do happen. I thought you did great on this. You also had a great ending to it. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Owch.. Wow.. I really liked this. You have no idea how true that is here and in the world these days.. It's rather sad. It's so horrible how others treat people these days... But anyways, great job displaying that. An excellent write!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Good, but not excellent, its a bit too short and doesnt really express the feelings of the guy thats being bullied, but this might make it a bit depressing so maybe its better that its quite evasive of the details.... :s

neway, it does put across a simple message in a simple way and the rhyming is good :)

-biscuit-

I loved this poem...It was cute it made me laugh though at the end...I LOVED it...it reminded me of this boy that I went to high school with..now that i look back it was really sad what people did to him. but at the time i knew it was wrong, still! So yeah, I can relate to this...I think what you said is so true! Great job 5/5

Wow! That poems is so true, it happens to everyone, but really judging people is pointless. Why be friends with only people who are all skinny and pretty? I mean don't judge them by their looks. It's horrid and your poem shows that. :)

This poem is so true! And I'm glad to see a poem that actually stands up for those people. My favorite stanza was:

You start to feel better by putting him down.
Your lips rise to a smile,
As his lower in frown.
You did a very good job on this. The flow and rhythm was really good and it held up well and I just loved it! 5/5 Keep it up!

Oh my gosh! I love it! Some of the people I know do the exact same thing every single day they live. I feel horrible for the kids they pick on! Mainly because I used to be among the most popular few, but still. I do feel for them. =(

The poem, yes. Flow was excellent, topic was well chosen out, and it displayed excellent emotion in it. I'm really sorry if you get picked on by people. I'm here if you need me. ^_^ I know exactly how it feels. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Ah interesting write.
something different but so true..
Ive enjoyed reading this.truly.
5/5
God Bless!

Love it.

Ouuuhhh this is a good one! ya i can relate to this poem when i was little, i was being treated like this! and ya they are the looser :D