That is a damn good poem very visual and i can see every thing u explain really awsome 5/5
vsams

I give it a 6/5...lol...but I liked it

Nice job 5/5

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

Leaves off with a question. Like that. So some great visual descriptions. Iffy flow in some places. Liked how this left off with a question and had this raw sense about it.
~Faith-less