That's deep. by the emotions it seems that death is a answear. keep writing:)

This poem really touched me.I am everything that girl is.I can relate to this poem a little too well for comfort.

Wow really good...it really touched me
keep it up!-xxx-

Oh hun its beautiful, i can really relate to that right now, you write so brilliantly you're so talented hun xxxx

Woooo!! I luv the ending..no matter how sad it is!
very great poem..full of sadness and agony..
you did a great job honey..your words truly spoke wuts n ur mind

Keep it up
Best Of Luck
NemO XxXxX

Oh my god!!!!!!! sis!!! that was amazing!!!!!! very diffrent style to ur other poems it seems. but just as good. ...so was this reflected to u in a few ways? or just came to mind?
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Hey sweetie! Don't you give up now cos you are my friend and I know we will always be there for each other. Sad poem, can understand how you feel. Amanda xxxx

Some nice words chosen to play to the advantage of this piece. Not really that strong on something...it was missing something. As far as I could tell there was only one spelling error. Overall it was a nice write.
~Faith-less

Wow-that is an amazing poem! It is so powerful and flows so nicely--The rhyme works well in it-Great write!!! 5/5

You put a lot of emotion into your poems, i like it. your poems that ive read so far are both strong and well composed, and you have a good choice of words. keep it up.
Driver

This is amazing, 5/5