Hm, that's good, but I think you could really add on to this a come out with a wonderful poem. But hey, that's just my opinion. I read your other poems too, and I think if you extended this one, it could become one of my favorites! =p

Well, great job!

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Tina
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Yeah tina was right this one is great and simple nice job keep it up

She cannot confide.
In noone she trusts.
It's not that she cant,
Its the fact that she must.

Is so profoundly true!!! I REALLY dig your stuff. we share the same style only the 2nd I have found.