Excellent..!-xxx-

Ohm..good work! i liked the ending words..:"Forever I will have the scar of you
A boy I thought was perfect
Is now a man
And I am just a faded memory" sounds perfect for the end! the other part are great too but you know that everything has to have a perfect end.

Great job! and thx for your comment on mine!

Charlie

I really liked this one keep it upp girly