Omg this is simply amazing.
I love the way you wrote it and started each stanza with, 'clutched i lied' etc. It is simply amazing.... WONDERFUL work. 5/5

-sarah

Thanks Sarah! Clic on my profile to see some of my other works. Your feedback is most welcomed.

Awesome vocabulary use!
This is a really touching poem.
Keep writing, you're really talented.
I love your work.

Love
Tina
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Wow...moving...
love the rhyme scheme.