I won't let ya go off the edge!

Aww.. that is so sad and you did such a great job on this. I really like it. I hope that you don't really feel this way, but you did a great job expressing your emotions in this. 5/5 Keep it up & take care!

I liked the poem

much luv,
jubilee dominguez

This is so sad.
Hopefully you dont feel like this.
I really like it. Keep up the good work!
x3 Mandy

In the first staza you rhymed "cut" with "rut".. it just didnt sound right.. i know it's hard and i do it too sometimes.. but try to think of another word and i think it would sound better.
other then that i dont see anything wrong with it. all the other rhymes were good and the poem flowed well together. 5/5

~Kristina

Wow i really liked this one, on a subject we both understand greatly.

Aww sad but i feel your pain! 5/5

~Kristina