I think we all have a dark side but the thing to remember is where there is dark there is light. Remember we all meet people at different times in our life for a reason. Meeting that guy has really opened you up as a poet. I think that you have really grown and I hope that you keep writing. 5/5

Take Care,
Drew

I like it very much. The rhymes are great, and they don't seem forced, the flow is natural, and the feelings in this piece are portrayed excellently.
My favorite stanza is:
-For so long I've gone astray
Now I wana follow your way.
The way of your righteousness,
The way of your glorious grace.-