This poem os so simple yet really elegant. is is so cute! it makes me want to hug and kiss the one i love. nice job.

Awww......i love this poem i wish someone wrote me something like that to me! But yeah....ummm.....it's just a curiosity....fo you have a girlfriend? well yeah sorry i just wanted to know! Peace~
~*~Cindy~*~

Oh never mind i read your profile...best wishes!

Aww that was cute=) it made me smile.
-Kayla

Aww a very cute poem!!

:P a sweet poem:)

Nathaniel --
Aww, how cute! You did a great job on this, not much to say. The rhyming was perfect, and this was definitely a great poem from you. Keep this up, you`ve got talent. Don`t ever forget that. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Aww such a sweet poem 5/5 xx have just sat here and read all of your poems and although this is the only one I commented on, i think your work is great and look forward to reading more in the future ;)

Awwww.. this was adorable! i cant keep the smile off my face.. the way you worded it was so simple but the underlying meaning so complicated.. wonderful work! 5/5

I really like your style. Love love poems that are short and sweet. 5/5 Loretta

Wow, great poem. short, sweet, to the point, yet really gets the message through.

5/5