Profound in it's simplicity. It's rare for me to read three lines and find myself engrossed by them, but that's just what this piece did.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow...That was so short, yet it caught my attention instantly and never let it go, even now Im still sitting here thinking about it. Those were the most powerful three lines Ive ever read. Such a strong picture was painted with such few words. Great job!

~Mo~

Wow this is a great haiku! i really liked it a lot 5/5