Beautiful poem Chels. It sent a powerful message, I too wish I could do something like that, but in today's society some people could do some pretty bad things to you, which is also wrong. You are a great girl and a great messanger of God, this poem was amazing, 5/5, it was great. Beautiful stanza, great story-line, it was lovely, just lovely :)

Its touching and powerful poem with a very valid message Chels. I love how with your poetry you tell stories and can capitivate me with each and every line you write...I love how your so appreciative and thoughtful of everything you possess and all those around you - you really a shining star we need more of in the world ;o)

Beautiful poem--I like the topic you wrote about and the message you are giving is so true! Very powerful piece---5/5 Keep it up!