Well written, everybody needs a good diary. The last line didn't really make sense, if you want to check that. But other than that part, nice job.

This is a beautifully penned poem, I truly love it! 5/5

I then must gt a diary to b talkin to wen i feel neglected..wel done

Very sad and deep poem i know how you feel i feel your pain in this poem very touching 5/5