As usual you write from true emotions and it was brilliant. I can say that writing has been the best release for me and I can see it`s a great release for you too. Great work keep it up. 5/5

Drew

Just like you I am trying very hard to keep it together I just have a few dark moments here and there. Hey I finally took her pic off my screen thats helped alot. I wish you would write more love your writing.

Drew

Very sad poem with sheer mournful feelings clearly expressed. I just just have one suggestion to you, just keep the poem well structured in a good stanza form. :)

Your poems are great

Tc
Fsams

Very sad poem with sheer mournful feelings clearly expressed. I just just have one suggestion to you, just keep the poem well structured in a good stanza form. :)

Your poems are great

Tc
Fsams

Very nice poem, a true portryal of emotions and feelings straight from heart, nicely written as well.

I would personally split it into 2 stanza's between 'Knowing my death is soon to come.' and 'Now I'm falling to the ground,' however it's not something thats majorly needing seeing to.

Very well done, another 5/5 :)