THANKS FOR ENTERING THE CONTEST!
this poem isnt as good as your entered poem but still had the meaning and everything that you supply in it.
5/5
~Emah

Powerful message!
This is so inspiring. It reminds me of a friend of mine who was recently diagnosed with cancer. He's in the last stages of chemo and he's been just so upbeat throughout it all. He's quite an inspiration to me as is this poem.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Damn good job i like it

Good poem. Good message at the end of the poem. It was well written all together and I thought you did a good job.

Good poem, I liked the message and i loved this stanza:

"She speaks slowly and clearly
using medical terms only an expert would understand
only one work is ever heard
one which would stop any heart dead"

You did a wonderful job!! 5/5!!!

Ah very well written,
It was indeed a good read.

Nice piece!