*claps* well written. lol i dont even no if you can improve on anything your writing is some of the best i've read so far :D

~Terra

Intereesting word choice....keep it up wit ur many creative styels.. always work oit be set apart from all otehr writers.

Lissa

This is the reason why I chose you as one of my favourites. And the other reason why you are my favourites is that your poems are not window display kind that is too flattery. Anyways, I want to thank you for your comments on my poem Addicted. I wished others too who read it would strive a bit to vote and comment my poems. Thanks again. TC. 5/5.

This was pretty good, but a little confusing.. Maybe if you explained what you are saying more it would be better.. The flow was good and the emotion was strong, but it was difficult to really understand what you were saying.. Nice job 4/5

I like this poem... it reminds me of how i write my poems

i write about never getting up.. to even write a single line about thoughts of quitting, i dont think i could do it...

wonderful job; simple and sweet

What an amazingly crafted little piece, well done!
Neil.

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

Aw wow this poem is really good.=)

Realy deep & and simple. 5/5