Caitlin --
Wow, you`re very well spoken! Your wording was simply shocking in this poem ;; you used big words, which, in poetry, is essential. I think it definitely added a nice twist which most people don`t include in their poetry. You definitely did a great job, keep it up. 5/5

Samantha Hollywood

That was very dark and intense. I loved it...your words and descriptions were lovely. My favorite part had to be the ending with that though...I mean it just topped the hole thing off. Amazing job girl. Keep it up. :)
xoxo