Thats a good poem

Nice

Nice

Wonderful poem. straight to the point. 5/5. u should write more poems. i like ur style on this poem =)

Very deep Marshal, your reader can see that you had to dig deep for that and that your emotions come out, but the feeling of it is cold, kind of how you are feeling. Really good write!!

Godbless
Sammib

Hey Guys i was just hoping for some feedback, critisism, just whatever you think about iy