This was a real good , I liked it and understood it,But still you have to come up with a format and a consitent rhyme scheme thoughout your poem,never rush to get a poem done,some take min,hours,days and even years,take your time and let the poem come to you,great job

That was beautiful, i think that's how love should be! 5/5

Aww baby i love yo this poem and any thing u wont i will give to u cause like i said before if i can't have u i don't wont any one else u are my life and my world

Aww that's sweet. 5/5
-kakashi